Tuesday, November 18, 2008

..........................The Yellow Rose Comments

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The Veil is translucent. Owls eye complacently.
Do not fly. Not this day, night.
They blink gold discs. Ruffle feathers.
Talon branches tight, anchoring legends.
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elysabeth faslund
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Unwritten Soul 15 April 2012

I love the passion, calm, soft and beauty in this write...it could be one of the best poems that i have found for today..keep writing with all elements above! 10+++_Unwritten Soul

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Adi Cox 04 July 2009

There is so much going on in this poem. It can be understood in so many different ways. I think you have struck a rich vein of creativity.10/10

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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