Saturday, August 3, 2019

The Yellow Poncho Comments

Rating: 5.0

isn't it strange that many years ago,
a dainty lass wore a yellow poncho,
and twirled around in her garden like a golden butterfly,
a little boy watched her...couldn't erase the memory the rest of his life!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2020

Loved it.. appreciated.. clear 10 Great changes Sunday,9th August 2020 I don't know whether it is good or bad but it has led me to believe that originality has been lost a great loss at the cost of humanity Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 August 2019

What a lovely narrative! and penned so well, a lovely poem overall.

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Thank you, Dear Poet! Really appreciate your valuable comments!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2019

'Like a golden butterfly'! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thank you, Dear Friend! Delighted to share!

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Ratan Ghosh 04 August 2019

A beautiful poem, touches the heart

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Thank you, Dear Poet! Appreciate your encouraging comments!

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Leeann Azzopardi 04 August 2019

a great poem of love lost and eternal longing

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Thank you, Dear Poet! Appreciate your inspiring comment!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 August 2019

A very enchanting story. A vivid portrayal of love that is so magical. Beautifully written. Loved reading it.

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Thank you, Dear Friend! Your comments are so inspiring! means a lot!

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Thank you, Dear Friend! Your comments inspire me! means a lot!

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