The Yellow Balloon Comments
My mind is a seascape of caressing, white, foamy waves,
With a sandy beach with lifeguards prepared to save.
You're tall, muscular with blue, mirror eyes,
Reflecting our love as breathtaking,
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your poems give peace to my soul and rest to my mind a always loving poem
a yellow balloon can easily be seen. a good write nice imagery
Very imaginative write, tells a lovely romantic story. Well done Hazel.
In short your mind is great Hazel. The poem is a beautiful account of things rarely spoken of otherwise. Your perception of true poetry often amazes me and I begin to learn new things.
Hazel, this is really beautiful, the flows moving so smooth like a silk, and good enough as a melodic poetry..very cool write! ! keep writing great_SOul
Enticing ambience! I love the image- The dancing of flames in an open air, the comparison of love as the perfect connection of sea and sky and the effect of the floating balloon in the backdrop of a tantalizing seascape! Altogether the poem is a pleasure to read! A 10 it well deserves!
Seabreezes can't cool our robust desires, Like the dancing of flames in an open fire. The yellow balloon, still dancing with the gleam of the charismatic moon, The small child no longer cries or calls! beautiful write. perhaps u have measured my heart. i like such poem sprouted from deep soul
yellow balloon, charismatic moon, I like it, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
Vivid and mesmerizing lines, a very engaging poetry with very exceptional style.10++++++++++++
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8/1/2025 3:45:11 AM # 1.0.0
A superb write Hazel I like the softness in these words