Sunday, October 24, 2010

The Years Comments

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Times I got out of the sparkling sunlight,
crawled against those rays flashing about
Times I thought of the shade, thoughts of it to get onto my feet,
to regain my grips over the roads I lost,
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Dagimawi Tujuba
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Kevin Carney 25 October 2010

Times I cried out for imminent descend, grabbed the delusion, choosed the faint boulevard, felt the mendacity of the silence, the lunacy of the still, the slipping of false grips out of the vulnerable, the giddy teardrops, the surprise of the strolls..... Very interesting poem, I love this set of lines. Such great wording that generates thought. Your poem is excellent. Thank You for the invite.

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C N Prem Kumar 25 October 2010

Different way of expressing philosophy through poem. Great

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