Monday, January 19, 2009

The Years Comments

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Days go away behind and we
Can't feel as they pass
What is it? Why is it looking on me?
- Image on the looking glass
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allan macli borges
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Kesav Easwaran 27 September 2009

'The years run fast Life runs faster than years We can make it a storm… Or just tears'... beautifully said Allan...some thing more to those words than mere philosophy...thanks...10

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We can make it a storm… Or just tears..... the years just pass by and we never know when they are over for us...... beautiful write keeping visiting my sight.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 January 2009

A beautiful poem..... Last stanza is very meaningful. Life is running faster than time. A bit philosophical and desirous.........10.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 January 2009

Very good poem with philosophical touch. Similar to my thoughts in my poem 'driftwods'

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Ying Escalona 19 January 2009

365 days.....most are boring and few are not

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