Sunday, November 8, 2020

The Year Of Living Dangerously Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's touch and go out there.
Well it used to be once.
Not any more.
Certainly not today.
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Shaun Cronick
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Dominic Windram 08 November 2020

Great free verse poem Shaun..with lots of anaphora for dramatic effect i, e ' This, ' ' No', ' About' ' Stay'. As a rather anti - social creature myself, I haven't found things too bad. Indeed, I've got a lot of things done, that I normally wouldn't have been able to do ordinarily. Nevertheless, my rather gregarious sister is currently suffering badly. She really misses going out with friends, shopping etc. Anyway, ' it's a please find a cure inspired five from me!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2020

Amazing poem, brilliantly worded.5 Stars Full Vote. Thanks for sharing, dear Shaun. About the title: The Year added with an S in the plural format is the exact title for the film about the pre-times during the reign of the late President Soekarno of Indonesia in the leading role is Helen Hunt, an North American moviestar. Thank you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 November 2020

I concur with your wonderful thoughts, Shaun. A beautifully crafted poem full of hope. Poignant yet it gives us the strength to conquer darkness to be able to see a better tomorrow. A very apt write for this great pandemic, in this time of uncertainty. Five Stars and to my Poem List.

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