When I had “X” money
“three” called me honey
days were sunny
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Lolz..i realy enjoyed dis poem..i had a big smile while reading dis poem..u r a grt poet yaarr! ! : -)
Very quirky and fun with great rhythm and flow! I really enjoyed this great write!
Very interesting. I loved it. One of your best. The flow the idea, the mood of the poet, all clear from the lines. mature.
Interesting! Actually da fact is so true......... A great poem i love dis!
So all goes with the 'factor', , , It's what goes on around theme rendered in simple words with deep connotations
Romance is like a game of chance, where Y becomes exasperated. Nice write
They aXed you? well that because X is your factor...axed or be an ex..lol joking, nice wording! ! _Soul
Hahahaha! ! ! Nice work, Kanav! ! ! ! You've followed rules of mathematics too: D