Saturday, May 18, 2013

The 'X' Factor Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I had “X” money
“three” called me honey
days were sunny
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Rishabh Bidya 07 February 2014

Hahahaha! ! ! Nice work, Kanav! ! ! ! You've followed rules of mathematics too: D

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Divya Gupta 02 November 2013

Lolz..i realy enjoyed dis poem..i had a big smile while reading dis poem..u r a grt poet yaarr! ! : -)

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Hazel Durham 24 May 2013

Very quirky and fun with great rhythm and flow! I really enjoyed this great write!

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Jahan Zeb 23 May 2013

Very interesting. I loved it. One of your best. The flow the idea, the mood of the poet, all clear from the lines. mature.

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Ruby Mostazir 21 May 2013

Interesting! Actually da fact is so true......... A great poem i love dis!

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Neela Nath Das 21 May 2013

X factor worked here wonderfully. Great!

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R.j. Wynn 21 May 2013

At least you know where to go now man!

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Yasmin Khan 21 May 2013

So all goes with the 'factor', , , It's what goes on around theme rendered in simple words with deep connotations

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Captain Cur 20 May 2013

Romance is like a game of chance, where Y becomes exasperated. Nice write

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Unwritten Soul 20 May 2013

They aXed you? well that because X is your factor...axed or be an ex..lol joking, nice wording! ! _Soul

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David Wood 20 May 2013

Great flow and rythem to this poem.

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Dave Walker 20 May 2013

A great poem with a wonderful flow.

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Anush Gupta 18 May 2013

Very relevant and delivering a philosophical message.

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