Wednesday, January 15, 2020

The Wrong Diagnosis Comments

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Oh God you know how hard I try
To understand the how and why
Of each decision that I make
If only for my patients' sake
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Richard Lackman
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Bri Edwards 08 February 2020

Fantastic! keep the faith, doc. Think of all the CORRECT diagnoses you've made! ! You HAVE made a few, right? Of course, you may be a quack and only a [VERY] competent poet, with tons of malpractice suits pending. Yikes! ! bri :) to MyPoemList

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Tulsi Shrestha 15 January 2020

Each line flooded with rhyme from the womb of rhythm, really delighted me with sweetness of impalpable pleasure. I do adore your unbelievable creativity of managing breath and beats in dead words. Magnificent articulation skill worthy for praising.

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