Sunday, July 5, 2009

The Writing Class At Lampeter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pens are lifted
and there’s the click;
the shuffling of sheaves as we out-breathe
and then’s the intersection of an insistent bird’s trill;
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Jacqui Thewless
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Gone Away 04 March 2010

You paint such a vivid picture here, I remember well the pained silence in exam halls. The tenor cough made me laugh.

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Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

nice poem, well penned with deep ideas.......10

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Marilyn Lott 05 July 2009

I was fascinated by your story as you took us through the writing class. You obviously studied every breath and sound of this space of time and shared it with us. We were there just as you were. A true example of a good writer. Great job, Jacqui! '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Patrick McFarland 05 July 2009

I really enjoyed this Jacqui. I could almost here Ken's drill as I read. 10+

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