Pens are lifted
and there’s the click;
the shuffling of sheaves as we out-breathe
and then’s the intersection of an insistent bird’s trill;
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I was fascinated by your story as you took us through the writing class. You obviously studied every breath and sound of this space of time and shared it with us. We were there just as you were. A true example of a good writer. Great job, Jacqui! '10+! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn
I really enjoyed this Jacqui. I could almost here Ken's drill as I read. 10+
You paint such a vivid picture here, I remember well the pained silence in exam halls. The tenor cough made me laugh.