Monday, July 23, 2012

The Wren Comments

Rating: 4.3

If thou wert my only wren,
I'd make a golden dome then;
As thy nest o'er my lorn skies
To hear thy song as I arise
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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* Sunprincess * 09 June 2014

..............a beautiful poem and so sweetly the song of the wren....enjoyed..

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 September 2012

Lovely piece. I've written a piece entitled Wren Similiar.

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The Reader 29 August 2012

Boht Aalaa -vipins....

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Saadat Tahir 26 August 2012

wooo...wow mate you done a beauty there classical, charming and very stylish....you can rightly take pride in this....brings to mind some great old poems... cheers ***

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Marieta Maglas 06 August 2012

wonderful poem, like a song....

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Valsa George 04 August 2012

A beautiful love lyric, rhyming and melodious! ! ! Very enjoyable too! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

believe me..........very rich in meaning like a delicious dish with all nutritive values.......... like you always say......TOP MARKS! ! ! ........

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Valerie Dohren 01 August 2012

Lovely poem about a lovely little bird - good one.

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Claudia Krizay 26 July 2012

I love this! The originality is spectacular! Great job! ! ! ! CAK

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Hans Vr 26 July 2012

This is a suberb poem, Vipins. Heart warming, very peotic and such a pleasure to read. Excellent!

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Neela Nath Das 26 July 2012

Rhythmic and deep.No, adieu, no parting.Immortal bird will take.But, it will be singing ever with its cocked tail.

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Unwritten Soul 23 July 2012

The best, I think you should never stop writing, and hope by releasing three new poems, your desire to do poetry will be flamed and activate your interest again...this poem is a great piece..do more_Unwritten Soul

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