The Wound: A True Incident..... Comments

compact, touchy, beautifully penned the sad fact dear kafil! 10+

A real tragedy....ruining a child's life and leaving him badly scarred...a very well told story despite the language faults.

A real tragedy....ruining a child's life and leaving him badly scarred...a very well recounted incident.

The wounds on this child's mind will never heal...the narrator presented a sad but true narrative of 'The Wound: A true incident.This line pierced my heart: 'why you make me hang you? a 10 poem for sure.

very painful poem dear Kafil, its make me sad, Allah with this young boy, well write

This peom was really touching! .. liked reading it.. a lot of feelings between the lines.. enjoyed reading it :)

Kafil nice and sad poem well done there Luwi

A very sad sympathetic incident.

poor kid...... These kids must be saved!

what a fine written poem...you have revealed the dark side of life.............Thanks 10+++

The poem has captured the real life with great clarity.

you have vividly picturised a brutual life. what about the boy. god will take care of him.we are gods children. voted10 surya

A picture dipicting the truth of our society today. Damage is done and children grow up with it usually end up doing the same mistreatment to their wives. Congrats on a very good poem. Lynn

wonderful narrative poem, very touching.......10+++

sad poem.. i have tears because i went through similar things in my childhood.

violence in marriage is a terrible thing but its the watching eyes of a child.. 10

A violent scene that could have been avoided! Divorce could have been a much better solution. An illusion of sacrificing for the sake of kids ends up with psychologically disturbing them and two cruel deaths!

woe! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! your WOUND moved me to tears! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! crual father! ! ! I watched the scene! ! ! you described obviously your wound!

Hi Kafil, this is indeed a very sad tale, more so, because it is a true story. Who knows the mind of man, not this man, that's for sure. Frank