The Worthless Cash Comments

The layout of this poem with every second line having only one word works really well. The poem is so well thought out and my favorite two lines 'Flowers without you clash'. Well done Persian! A ten from me. Karin Anderson

I know very well this feeling showed here... yes, sometimes we feel worthless if the most precious part of us is far away... please read my poem 'About Dama' (on how I wanted her before and how I miss her now) .

one word reveleations to the essence of life

imaginative creation nice rhymes, and nice choice of words....10