Saturday, April 18, 2015

The Worth Comments

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I was in the middle in the road
where cars and bus passing in my side,
I am thinking if it's the end
for no one is cared.
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Joezel Jayme
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 18 April 2015

Woah this is in pensive mood swings which makes it an artistic poem superbly written and appeals. Thumbs up for the freeverse. Pls do review my latest poem too and u may read others.

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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015

Beautiful, Joecel. We are all diamonds but can be as fragile as glass

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