Saturday, November 24, 2012

The World Will Say You My Wife Comments

Rating: 3.5

Seeing you my dear!
My eyes forget all other sights,
Feeling you inside me
I just start flying in the sky.
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Vizard Dhawan
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Vishal Sharma 11 October 2015

rhyming scheme is so routine in my poetry

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Asif Andalib 24 November 2012

Good sentiments. I like it

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