Tuesday, July 3, 2012

The World Unseen Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beanth it's ample shade
Lies two flowers,
Bound by a robust connection
Surrounded by a mist of peace
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Walija Amir
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Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Walija. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Saleem Tharani 03 July 2012

elegant and effective, great outlook around life's mystery.

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Crisp, tight linage moves mellifluously throughout this eloquent pen-gem...Impressive write ~FjR~

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