Thursday, June 22, 2006

The World, Unfair Comments

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When yuor day is going wrong they tell u to keep your head up;
They dont know how sad u are they dont know your gonna erupt;
Your feelin really down cause your friends are in trouble;
Your friends have to leave u, your turning into rubble;
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Melissa Broomhead
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David Darbyshire 22 June 2006

nice poem, good work, the world is unfair, but some people do care, Love dave xxx

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Melissa Broomhead

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Pheonix AZ
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