Thursday, November 5, 2015

The World To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world to me
Is a tender blade of grass,
Whose greenness enamours
And sharpness bruises,
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ATUL CHANDRA SARKAR
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Elena Plotkin 05 November 2015

Very well-written. Full of life, imagery, and flow. Definitely leaves the reader wanting more. Small criticism believe it should be losses not loses.

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