Sunday, September 22, 2013

The World Of My Life Comments

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I am torn into two
Move s step forward to accept what life is
Take two steps backward not to accept
What life has given to me.
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Abdul Wahab
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Heather Wilkins 24 September 2013

the situations in the world today is very disturbing. Sometimes it makes me wonder what is going on here. I seem to think there is a better way than war. If the politicians want it. thoughtful write

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 September 2013

Nice poem a desire for peace we have to accept life has given much war has looted in wholesale what peace to be in pieces example is there UN peace keeping has destroyed the Iraq, Afghan and....Peace has been shttered by peace keepers....A cage keeper will not bring freedom

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