Tuesday, August 7, 2007

The World Of Fake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't leave the house without it
In your world that you make
And keep it fixed no matter what
Your smile that is fake.
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Rachel Slimm
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Karen Clements 07 August 2007

Hey what truth! ! ! I sincerely agree with your words! ! Let's hope that the ones who do not live in reality eventually come around to not being fake! ! ! Love Karen xx

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Marvin Brato 07 August 2007

I like this poem, fakes languish in this world but it is the world that we make that counts to make us sane. Thanks for sharing. worth the 10.

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Rachel Slimm

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Hayle, Cornwall
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