Today the world...
Landscaped in pen and ink by
hidden hands
Is winter and embossed in white
...
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life is a harsh winter, but we can enjoy the mirror for a while.....
Excellent write, whatever you compose- wonderful. You are a master poet.
A poetic intoxication, A winter's love fantasy caressing and flirting across a page of white daydream scripted as only you can –
dear sandra, m house is very near to the great indian painter raja ravivarma....he paints with colours and brush....but as the reader differs, your word-art also differs, which give birth to a million different paintings.. great...........reading you is absolute pleasure. your soul knows how to sing.......thanks........
You have let this reader share a much-loved winterscape of tightly woven slices and concrete images...brought it to life. Oh what a great word-mistress you are! ! ! xxelysabeth
Your imagry here creates a picture of sheer beauty, I thoroughly enjoyed the read Sandra, Excellent work.--Melvina--
When I was a child, sometimes in the wintertime, I would look at winter's beauty and almost cry. I wanted to catch that beauty in words, and I didn't know how. In this poem, you've shown me how.
Sandra you have made winter sound like the fare season in this poem such a beautiful discripton.In your poem you have made the coldest season into a wonder world no wonder they call it A Winter Wonderland, your poem has all of this cheers Sylvie
Dear Sandra, A delicate depiction. The second stanza seemed the most vivid to my eye. Gregory XXO
Great poem.I liked it.Your poem has brought warmth in this world.
Great poem, not just the title but the imagery and emotions expressed in the body of the poem. Undoubtedly a 10 should be awarded tothe poetskater. Gershon!
Very beautiful and descriptive but the title pulled me in, great title!
I can smell the winter as I read this poem and I can hear the skate blades scrape across the frozen ice and feel the meanings as I progress reading...nice +++++10 regards