Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, October 3, 2013

The World Is Suffering Comments

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If I say I am seer
People will not hear
Offer no cheers
Shed no tears
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Re: The world is suffering (Score: 1) by butterflyzrfree on Sunday, October 06,2013 (06: 21: 00) Parts of this don't make sense. You are a good poet, dont forct the rhyme.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Re: The world is suffering (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Saturday, October 05,2013 (13: 56: 34) I like how universal the title is.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2013

Re: The world is suffering (Score: 1) by Seshat_Nibada on Saturday, October 05,2013 (13: 56: 34) I like how universal the title is.

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Bharti Chandwani 04 October 2013

beautiful poem sir....

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

if I say I am seer People will not hear Offer no cheers Shed no tears

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

So true April Sutton-BoggsLess than a minute ago Not real strong but strong enough that you proved your point. Nice job! ! ! Comment +1 This has truth to it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

Ty Roc4 minutes ago I like it Comment +1 Well written

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

David Smith4 minutes ago Pretty good message too Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2013

Carly Wile3 minutes ago its pretty good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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