Saturday, May 5, 2012

The World Is Mad Comments

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Sleep child, the world is mad.
Sleep and be sane to your heart
the world is mad.
My parting kiss seals my oath, this time
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Kebe Iwara
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Ramesh Rai 30 May 2015

Fantastic and outstanding. This world has become mad that so chasing all time with no reason. great marks.

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Savita Tyagi 29 May 2015

Just to add to my comment your poem captures with great sensitivity the inability and helplessness that we some time feel in dealing with the dark side of life's happenings. At the same some we have desire to protect and caution our loved ones about the ills of the world. Child stands beautifully as a symbol for projecting all these sentiments along with our escapist mentality.

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Savita Tyagi 29 May 2015

Great expressions! Thanks for letting me know about it.

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Franca Kenneth 12 June 2012

Great poetry. Thanks for sharing.

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