Tuesday, October 30, 2012

The World Is Coming Comments

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Tears of many
fears of all
the dark is near
the cold is coming
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heather Wilkins 04 September 2013

your message is coming true. and it will collect. good message

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Dee Corpolongo 13 November 2012

What a statement made in so little words! Great impact. Such sad but true words to make one think. Thank you.

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An eye opener though nothing can be reversed for now. Short but how strong your poem is in its message...

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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