Wednesday, October 10, 2018

The World Is Burning Comments

Rating: 5.0

On screens
Like a paper in a hungry fireplace
I see the world burning
I smell the smell of time and what waiting
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2018

On screens Like a paper in a hungry fireplace I see the world burning I smell the smell of time and what waiting Of its consonant characters Has filled. I see the children whose features were aged As Dolls nobody paid attention to..........so touching and heartfelt inscriptions. A brilliant poem on political issue amazingly shared.

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Shurouk Hammoud 22 October 2018

yes dear friend we are living in such a cruel world that breaks the heart into pieces.thanks for reading and commenting.

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Shurouk Hammoud 22 October 2018

yes dear friend, we live in such a cruel world but apparently we are burning as well.thanks for reading.

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Shurouk Hammoud 22 October 2018

yes dear friend, we live in such a cruel world, and apparently we are burning as well.thanks for reading

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 October 2018

Until I become dumb And my maternity sleeps on its tombstones. On screens I see the colored flags as coffins and barefoot dreams, Their moons got paled, .Oh this is terrible depiction of the situation in Syria. i read your mind. how terrific it should be for you, especially for the syrians who are living there now...... this is a great poem. i read and re read it. tha nk u dear poetess. tony

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shurouk hammoud 15 October 2018

thank you dear poet for reading beyond the lines and beyond my soul that I poured here, nothing might be as terrible as war of all its different forms. bless you and many thanks for reading.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 October 2018

Write comment. A great start with a sublime poem, Shurouk. Thanks

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Shurouk Hammoud 10 October 2018

thanks for reading, Jazib

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