Thursday, May 24, 2012

The World Is Asleep Comments

Rating: 4.9

The world is asleep,
Yet it is silently atuned
To fixing all ills in its wake
For our sake. As we slumber
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Jennifer Chalk
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Ramesh Rai 18 October 2014

Like a perpetual stream nature is also engagged in accruing energy for the next day.A true write in motion and mind/10.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 June 2012

our bodies to create dividends! the energy we needed, for the next day work..Nice poem JC.

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Heather Wilson 13 June 2012

For a free future of light and possibility, lovely words, wonderful poem. thank you.

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Simon Collins 06 June 2012

Great positive words, thanks

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Elna Nel 26 May 2012

I really enjoyed reading your work.

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Pheko Motaung 25 May 2012

Wonderful well crafted superbly written poems.I like the breath taking last line!

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