Wednesday, April 25, 2018

The World Is A Stage Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wherein there is room for survivors only,
As dead alive spactators hand out
Head downwards like bats
At the fringe of the stage
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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi
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Simon 25 June 2018

Well, true.... another lovely thoughtful poem.... 10+++++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 June 2018

I appreciate your feedback man, thanks a lot

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 May 2018

A beautiful poem dear friend! Appreciated the use of simile! Thanks for sharing...10

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Your comments in this poem add value in my poetry urge. Thanks.

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Lungelo S. Mbuyazi

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