The World Has Got Rotten Comments

First I must appreciate the rhythm in each line... And ofcause the strong massage conveyed by the whole write... Its wonderful the reflection of how the world is.. And the perfect image of how it looks, super! The_African_Son

great characterization of the rotten world..... definitely need another savior..nice write

Wow! This poem blows my mind my friend! Well done and congratulations to youA

This world is ours we must protect it with care, think positively to do wonders... poets penned to light Worms are on the food. Children inhale poison, There is nothing good. The sky appears dark, Air is heavy here, The Roads are serpentine,