Saturday, February 13, 2010

The World Empire Comments

Rating: 4.5

There’s fire in the smoky sky,
Ice layered above water,
Laws of nature, Humans defy,
The world seeks to an end.
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Aditya Mudbhary
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Matt Mooney 20 November 2010

'God himself in Satan's lair'-plenty of food for thought in this line.It sums up what you are saying in the rest of the poem and what you are saying is true.10.

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Anonymous Butterfly 26 February 2010

This poem is beautiful and sad. I added you on MyFavoritePoemList. Keep penning. Good luck. Have a nice day. B.B.

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Anne Unknown 25 February 2010

beautiful peom. really enjoyed it. keep writing

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Aditya Mudbhary

Aditya Mudbhary

Patan, Nepal
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