Wednesday, July 5, 2017

The World Beyond Comments

Rating: 4.6

The pigeons
kept hopping around me, picking the bajra grains
With their beaks,
While I waited under a Metro bridge,
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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Upendra Upm 20 July 2017

wonderful reflection on minor events a la Oscar photographer Ray whose pather panchali garnered 100 crores in three days in 2014, even after 30 years.he was a master on flights of piegons.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2017

Write comment. Great images. Static and animated. Thanks

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Rajnish Manga 05 July 2017

Yes, far away from the material and mundane world, there 'A far bigger world exists'. A man is engrossed in tiny issues which restrict his vision and approach. The poem truly underscores this fact and calls for a sublime approach to attain a higher state of consciousness spiritual achievement. Thanks a lot, Jasbir ji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 July 2017

Far bigger world exists and that is very beautiful and loving. This message is conveyed well by pigeons through collecting grains and flying. Freedom is the best choice for birds and also for all of us. Thank you for sharing a valuable poem. Excellently penned.10

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 July 2017

Hopping pigeons Worried, pensive, fidgeting Startled, the pigeons Spread their wings, And flew up into the cloudy heavens. Occasion oft he flying pigeons made you very positive Beautiful, warm loving and divine is the world in its real sense. We should have eyes to see it. Lovely reflective and spiritual poem. Thank you dear poetess. tony

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