Saturday, August 23, 2008

The World Around Me Comments

Rating: 2.7

The world around me
Is like a gold lined tomb
A Beautiful work of art
That holds hidden dangers
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Analissa Range
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. . 22 January 2009

what wonderful and realistic metaphors. you really do a great job of characterizing the world as you see it and showing how to live is a beautiful and risky thing at the same time.

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Mia Satterthwaite 23 August 2008

Hello I love this poem, very real and true at times.

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Analissa Range

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