The World Above Us Comments

this poet write about the unknown. the world above us and it is very beautiful. nicely written

some bful compaarison made... :)

A fresh approach, good work Ruth. Shaun.

This poet writes It seems like an artist Moving its paint brush, Over the blue paper and again like a cup of cider makes a lovely image..... The sun seems like a King, And the moon its Queen this seems the best thing,