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Awesome indeed! ......10+

Awesome words....a great re-telling of the 'fall of humanity'. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

beautifully written..made the story really interesting-10

Thanks for sharing your interesting spin on the creation story where sin entered the world. You have worded well the event and expressed deeply the result of the action made. There is a good flow in this and the imagery that comes forth was well formed, although the title and the theme of the work seemed of two different things. Your view is well portrayed in this of Eve and what took place, showing recognition and realisation that sin did not take place by whim but by design. Thanks for sharing and many blessings to you

Interesting write, the message of Genesis of original sin of Eve, is surely negated by the wish of Christ that we should turn the other cheek. I did however enjoy the poem as it is written beautifully. Bob