Wednesday, June 4, 2008

The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I open my eyes,
I see a bright sun,
Framed by the snowy clouds,
Shinning merrily above me,
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Lily Law
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Mimi Fakhira 25 March 2009

I love this poem! So beautifully framed by your magnetic lines...10!

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Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

good imagination here...and you bring out the essence of your write very softly and in a splendid way... for a nature lover, nothing can beat a star lit night...good piece.Lily...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 06 October 2008

'To wish that the world will stay as beautiful as ever, To wish that the world will stay as peaceful as ever.' 10 for this lovely poem.

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

hope your wish will come true because i'm getting frustrated waiting to come true. thanks md.

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Lily Law

Lily Law

Sarawak, Malaysia
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