Thursday, March 16, 2017

The World Comments

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The world isn't
perfect cause the
world is many
countries
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Laura arwen
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Daniel Brick 16 March 2017

The word W-0-R-L-D has really too many meanings to be meaningful. Your poem proves this but you don't give up. Instead you press on, listing more and more dimensions of this word. I'm 100% behind your effort to make the word as truthful as you can: some of these are scary truths but still must be acknowledged. Others are close to security of the word HOME! This is a poem of many answers but still the big question looms, WHAT IS THE WORLD? (I remember an art critic who said Picasso's endless creativity and huge production of paintings came from his love of the WORLD and embrace of it all, good and bad)

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