Wednesday, May 2, 2012

The World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every day an open book
New pages on which to write
Round, round, and around it goes
The days then wax into night
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Valerie Dohren
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Captain Cur 11 May 2012

I think I fit into line one and two, but I certainly don't want to end up on line five. Nice work Valerie.

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Juan Olivarez 09 May 2012

very well written, for the blood is the life.

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Danny Draper 07 May 2012

Succinct and emotional, powerful. But remember, where there is life there is hope.

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Dave Walker 06 May 2012

Wow, very powerful, and very true. fantastic poem.

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Eric Cockrell 05 May 2012

this one hits like a slap in the face. good work!

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Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

I agree. An acurate discription of the place of our abode. Very good.

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Heather Wilson 03 May 2012

Nice one Val, Don`t worry, we won`t let your Crimson River burst, we are on the way with buckets to bail out the water

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Neela Nath Das 02 May 2012

This poem is to me a dew dropp that fell from an angel's eyes! Nice.

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