The World Comments

I think I fit into line one and two, but I certainly don't want to end up on line five. Nice work Valerie.

very well written, for the blood is the life.

Succinct and emotional, powerful. But remember, where there is life there is hope.

Wow, very powerful, and very true. fantastic poem.

this one hits like a slap in the face. good work!

I agree. An acurate discription of the place of our abode. Very good.

Nice one Val, Don`t worry, we won`t let your Crimson River burst, we are on the way with buckets to bail out the water

This poem is to me a dew dropp that fell from an angel's eyes! Nice.