Every day an open book
New pages on which to write
Round, round, and around it goes
The days then wax into night
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Succinct and emotional, powerful. But remember, where there is life there is hope.
I agree. An acurate discription of the place of our abode. Very good.
Nice one Val, Don`t worry, we won`t let your Crimson River burst, we are on the way with buckets to bail out the water
This poem is to me a dew dropp that fell from an angel's eyes! Nice.
I think I fit into line one and two, but I certainly don't want to end up on line five. Nice work Valerie.