Monday, December 31, 2012

The Workings Of An Idi*t Comments

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You wake up, look out the window,
See the sun flood your room a little,
Tell yourself it'll be a good day,
But there's a doubt that never goes away.
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Soren Valentine
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Stevie Taite 26 January 2013

From the beginning we get the feeling this chap is stuck in a rut. Throughout we lose patience and sympathy as he surely should see that by trying to put love and happiness out there, he will start to get some back. He needs to change his perspective and attitude. Face what ever demon it is, and get past it. Heck I know a few like this! I enjoyed how you expressed your views here. Thanks

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David James 31 December 2012

Hon'ble Soren, There are days like these where I feel like this I do write letters and express myself but even If In the end I feel the same. I carry on the guilt- the shame; I only have- myself to blame, do not pitty the inane. Much respect. David James Crapper

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