Monday, December 14, 2015

The Words You Write Comments

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Your words show me the way
In the blind alleys of despair
When I'm stumbling against closed doors
Straying hither and thither in a rootless,
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Nosheen Irfan
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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

words of comfort does pose hope of not being alone for one.

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 January 2016

f it so happened That you ceased to write From whence would I get the light The fire to warm my ice-cold soul? Words, the need to write, the need to read and console oneself. all that is brought out so well in this poem. thank you dear poetess.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 22 December 2015

No body wants that spring dry up which feeds their writing....it's indeed a very beautiful and a kind of craving desire...I liked this piece from your pen...thanks for sharing

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Akhtar Jawad 14 December 2015

Many years ago there were pen friends who never met each other but exchanged letters. Now thoughts, views and emotions are exchanged on the web sites. It.s more effective as it is instant. But to me it appears that ego of the poetess is talking to it's super ego. The ego wants words from super ego for en lighting the paths of life. Or it may simply be a request to a loved one to favor with his words expressing love and caress. In any case it's a lovely poem.

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Nosheen Irfan 14 December 2015

Thank you sir for a nice interpretation of my poem. Your valuable comments mean a lot.

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 December 2015

Love and life! Working along with the muse of your mind. Nice work.

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Nosheen Irfan 14 December 2015

Thank you Edward.

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