Thursday, January 15, 2009

The Words You Didn'T Hear Me Say Comments

Rating: 5.0

Do you remember the night we stared at the stars?
My head laying on your chest, listening to every heartbeat
You said we would be together forever
You said any storm we went through,
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Marissa McFay
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Marshall Cline 27 January 2009

This is a very well written poem; it makes me emotional more and more every time I read it. You seem too express something real, not imaginary. I almost feel like you are speaking directly to me. Well writen. Sincerely ~Marshall Peter Cline II

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David Joaquin 15 January 2009

Great poem. A 10 from me.

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