Thursday, June 13, 2013

The Words Of My Supplication Comments

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Some words like butterflies
On my lips flutter and fly-
O God! Give me courage and might
To stay determined and upright
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Yasmin Khan
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Khalida Bano Ali 25 December 2014

A beautiful divine poem.........................

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Ruby Mostazir 21 December 2013

Very nice. May Allah bless you & fulfill all ur good desires....Ameen!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 June 2013

Good supplication in marvel style

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 16 June 2013

This is a lovely prayer, but after we pray it is good to believe that we receive it, or if it was not meant for us, it shall pass. Life is a school room, where we get lessons. Some is teaching us what to do, or some what never do again. If you can see the problems in your life like this, nothing will bother you. I went through war, revolution, dead bodies around, starvation, bombings, but all the time I just know, that it shall pass. And it did. I am the happiest in the world. Many thanks for your comment.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 June 2013

Prick and pierce some memories of the past When my lips said prayers but all were lost Those moments rest in my heart like pangs. a sad poem and most of us may feel the same..

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David Wood 13 June 2013

A beautiful supplication to God.

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Sallam Yassin 13 June 2013

Amen to this deep pray of heart

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Farah Ilyas 13 June 2013

Beautiful supplication ever....may ur all prayers be fulfilled (aamin)

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This could be a beautiful prayer with a sustained rhythm and a set of rhyme scheme by reediting.Sensibly written.

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Shahzia Batool 13 June 2013

joining you in this heart-felt complete prayer jasmeen!

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