Water vapors from Niagara
Awakened me
Feeling so fresh
And alive
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This is the equivalent of a self - portrait or an auto-biography, You, my dear Sulaiman, are the ultimate Word Warrior!
this is awesome, you are making it with this, Angelic Realm.
'...Olfactory sense of wisdom/Sneaks into my veins...' Great images and sentiments here. Keep up the fight, warrior!
This sounds like a place that I would love to wake up next to every morning. If this wouldn't give you the inspiration to write of all GOD'S beauty, then I don't know what would.This truly is a paradise.Great poem to get you in that dreaming mode.
This sounds like a place that I would love to wake up next to every morning.
Having been born and raised in Niagara Falls, NY this poem spoke to me. Thank you for sharing it and keep that poets eye in focus.
Very beautiful i love all your poems! ! *xoxoxoxox* -Johnnetta-
Lovely words, tell me in a poem a little true story about yourself, you the SULAIMAN, my God is your God.
i know i won't write differetntly from the 85 comments but it shows this poem is great i loved it so simple and full of meanings keep it up :) eman awad
very beautiful indeed..no doubt that ur one of the best writer on this site..truly deserves a 10+...
Simply impressive! ! Continue to inscribe your art. Poetically yours, BajanPoet.