The Wooden Ventriloquist Clock Comments

Mr. Martin Thanks for your comment on my latest writing. Appreciated, since most people don't make much an effort to do that these days... so i thought i'd return the favor. This one was quite interesting how you blend the workings of this clock with realism. It's unconventional, this concept. great choice of words.

Excellent imagery-'severe and break.how he hangs'-'wooden lips. the blackened ivory teeth' and 'some pocketwatch prophet'. You really can't get any better.