Tuesday, October 10, 2017

The Wooden Boat Comments

Rating: 5.0

You can
cross the river
flooded with
obstacles unlimited
...
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Binayakumar Mohanty
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Bhakti Sharma 28 October 2018

Nicely crafted poem.Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.

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Bhakti Sharma 27 October 2018

The poem wooden boat is a poem of different taste. Yhanks for sharing.

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Asochya Sidhatapa 21 October 2018

A lovable poem on the site.Thanks for sharing.

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Asochya Sidhatapa 21 October 2018

A poem worth reading.Thanks forsharing.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 December 2017

Me the wooden boat help.sir really enjoy your poem 10+++++++

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Akhtar Jawad 26 November 2017

Life is a flooded hostile river a boat is needed for a voyage. A loving friend may be the boat that helps in completing this voyage. A lovely poem.

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2017

there are some misspellings and perhaps syntax errors, but i admire one who dares to work in a (i assume) non-native language, and do a pretty good job of it. i wonder what Me, the wooden boat help means. hmm? at least it is FREE verse. i hate to pay for poems. bri :)

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Binaya Mohanty 17 November 2017

Thanks Sir for mentioning about the syntax errors for which I pay less importance.Regarding spelling error I may say that there might be some despite utmost care.I humbly accept my errors and omissions sir.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 October 2017

Life! ! Flooded with obstacles! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 26 October 2017

Thanks dear poet for inspiring words.Regards.

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Valsa George 15 October 2017

We are on a voyage through a perilous sea. If one can serve as a ferry boat to carry passengers to another port or to their destination, that will be the greatest service! Meaningful write!

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Nice inspirational comments for the poem mam I loved it.

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Bharati Nayak 11 October 2017

You can warm you up set me blaze with fire. Me, the wooden boat born of a life dethroned greenery lost long leaves wilted. - - - - - -Live's many obstacles can be overcome if we keep our hope alive.Hope is like the life sap that sustain us..A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Thanks mam for you read the poem with great patience. I loved the inspirational comments Binaya.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Thanks mam for you read the poem with great patience. I loved the inspirational comments for the poem. Binaya

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Suratha Kumar Rout 11 October 2017

You can wipe out the tears in the eyes unreachable... Lovely line in the poem. Thanks sir for the sharing.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Thanks for nice inspirational comments. I loved it. Binaya

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Thanks Sir for nice quotes and comments

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Bernard F. Asuncion 10 October 2017

Such an interesting poem, Binaya........

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Binayakumar Mohanty 17 October 2017

Thanks for nice remark for the poem. Binaya

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 10 October 2017

A boatful of metaphors, imageries and hopes of life make a fertile trial to ferry through the flooded river of your poetic skill. Thanks dear poet for the elegant combinations in each the leaves of the poem plant. A huge 10 for the sharing.

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Shakil Ahmed 10 October 2017

nice poem, you have presented your thoughts with brilliant images, thanks for sharing.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 10 October 2017

Thanks sir for appreciation and acceptance.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 10 October 2017

Thanks dear sir for appreciation and acceptance

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

While unlimited obstacles are flooded in river, the wooden boat still carries life smoothly to cross. Journey of life is just like wooden boat. Unlimited obstacles we face daily and overcome. A brilliant perceptional poem is well crafted is metaphorically presented...10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 10 October 2017

Thanks sir for such nice comments i do not know whether I deserve or not.definitely encouraging words.

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