You can
cross the river
flooded with
obstacles unlimited
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The poem wooden boat is a poem of different taste. Yhanks for sharing.
Me the wooden boat help.sir really enjoy your poem 10+++++++
Life is a flooded hostile river a boat is needed for a voyage. A loving friend may be the boat that helps in completing this voyage. A lovely poem.
there are some misspellings and perhaps syntax errors, but i admire one who dares to work in a (i assume) non-native language, and do a pretty good job of it. i wonder what Me, the wooden boat help means. hmm? at least it is FREE verse. i hate to pay for poems. bri :)
Thanks Sir for mentioning about the syntax errors for which I pay less importance.Regarding spelling error I may say that there might be some despite utmost care.I humbly accept my errors and omissions sir.
Life! ! Flooded with obstacles! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
We are on a voyage through a perilous sea. If one can serve as a ferry boat to carry passengers to another port or to their destination, that will be the greatest service! Meaningful write!
You can warm you up set me blaze with fire. Me, the wooden boat born of a life dethroned greenery lost long leaves wilted. - - - - - -Live's many obstacles can be overcome if we keep our hope alive.Hope is like the life sap that sustain us..A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.
Thanks mam for you read the poem with great patience. I loved the inspirational comments Binaya.
Thanks mam for you read the poem with great patience. I loved the inspirational comments for the poem. Binaya
You can wipe out the tears in the eyes unreachable... Lovely line in the poem. Thanks sir for the sharing.
A boatful of metaphors, imageries and hopes of life make a fertile trial to ferry through the flooded river of your poetic skill. Thanks dear poet for the elegant combinations in each the leaves of the poem plant. A huge 10 for the sharing.
nice poem, you have presented your thoughts with brilliant images, thanks for sharing.
While unlimited obstacles are flooded in river, the wooden boat still carries life smoothly to cross. Journey of life is just like wooden boat. Unlimited obstacles we face daily and overcome. A brilliant perceptional poem is well crafted is metaphorically presented...10
Thanks sir for such nice comments i do not know whether I deserve or not.definitely encouraging words.
Nicely crafted poem.Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem.