Wednesday, July 8, 2015

The Wooden Bench Comments

Rating: 5.0

With a twisted and scornful smile,
the broken old bench near the gate greets us for a while.
Its tattered limbs and discoloured face attracts everyone towards its surface.
Speaks loudly the volume of by-gone stories in a beat,
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Lopamudra Mishra
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Lopamudra Mishra 08 July 2015

Thankyou so much! :)

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Kelly Kurt 08 July 2015

A very touching poem, Lopamudra. Thank you for sharing Peace

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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 08 July 2015

this poem is so lovely. Without looking at any image, you made me picture this wooden bench and all it stands for: memories of time past, well done. Keep writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2015

Twisted with the muse of life! And, the struggles of the day. Nice work.

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