Thursday, October 25, 2007

The Wooden Ballerina Comments

Rating: 4.5

The graceful movements take your breath away,
And her complete perfection will last always.
The intensity of her voice has swept the world off its feet,
And the gentleness of her life has lingered in my soul.And i sit breathless with the world watching her die, watching her dance.
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Peya Jakob
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Anthony Gitoré 08 September 2008

Cruz, wats up man, You got a comment from my sis. YOU ARE BEING A SADIST AND SHOULD LEARN TO BE POSITIVE MINDED. Motswako

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 November 2007

Peya it's beautiful and sad too, we sing and dance on our own graves?

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Natalie Vail 01 November 2007

Another great write. You write great love poems, you know?

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