Monday, January 6, 2014

The Wonders Of A Tantrum Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I feel like screaming;
Others like kicking.
On a more childish occasion,
Giving a whine as protestaton.
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Rouren Torres
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So beautifully expressed the disillusionment and agitation… On how to vent the pent up emotions…

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Bri Edwards 27 July 2014

i enjoyed the message and the rhyming. but i do see two typos/misspellings. ask if you don't see them (if you care to) . one is a word i often have trouble spelling. thanks for sharing. bri :)

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Douglas Scotney 06 January 2014

I hope you are still a child

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