Wondering at the wonder of you
arresting eyes quietly persue
mellowing in your placid touch
rich confections genteel brush
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i prefer the title-selection in any poem, & i take care of my titles too...beautiful write it is! ! !
gliding over channeling through awakened by the wonder of you. lyrical and melodious. i cant say anymore, because when it comes to your poems i am speechless. (in this case wordless) . :)
Wonder at the wonderful and eyes quietly pursue. Beautiful opening for a nice poem. Thank you.
Beginning and ending with the wonder of you... wrapped in heartfelt words powerful in such a short poem...thanks and regards