Monday, August 19, 2013

The Wonder Of You Comments

Rating: 4.7

Wondering at the wonder of you
arresting eyes quietly persue

mellowing in your placid touch
rich confections genteel brush
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Heather Burns
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Ken E Hall 11 May 2015

Beginning and ending with the wonder of you... wrapped in heartfelt words powerful in such a short poem...thanks and regards

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Shahzia Batool 21 August 2013

i prefer the title-selection in any poem, & i take care of my titles too...beautiful write it is! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 August 2013

Wow..Wonderful poem..Loved reading it.

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Poetheart Morgan 20 August 2013

Yes Poetess, some people cause it to us!

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 August 2013

what a sweet drop.fresh and pleasant.liked it.

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Lucifera Santez 20 August 2013

gliding over channeling through awakened by the wonder of you. lyrical and melodious. i cant say anymore, because when it comes to your poems i am speechless. (in this case wordless) . :)

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Tribhawan Kaul 20 August 2013

Short, sweet and passionate poem.....great.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 August 2013

A ravishing poem to read! U write beautifuly too. :)

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2013

a swt n melodious write inspires the heart to bloom

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Ramesh Rai 19 August 2013

a swt n melodious write inspires the heart to bloom

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 19 August 2013

Wonder at the wonderful and eyes quietly pursue. Beautiful opening for a nice poem. Thank you.

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