Saturday, July 18, 2015

The Wonder Of Something Comments

Rating: 5.0

She never taught me a thing
But Oh....How I learnt so much

How not, I want to be treated
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Lyn Paul
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Denis Mair 08 February 2018

Such very special lessons have to be absorbed in the air you breathe at home.

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Bri Edwards 27 January 2018

(continued) .....as for: NEVER THINK YOU ARE NOTHING FOR YOU ARE TRULY SOMETHING! ...............that sounds vaguely familiar. oh, yes! ! my Mum/mom used to tell me (almost every day) : Bri, NEVER THINK YOU ARE SOMETHING FOR YOU ARE TRULY NOTHING! .............then she'd slap me. : ( to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 27 January 2018

i don't understand this line: How not, I want to be treated..........an Australianism? Lyn, your Mum taught some fine lessons! several of them i'd adhere to. but i need Materials in the bathroom. and when on a sightseeing tour of Afghanistan i DO follow a leader; i'm a follower then! (to be continued) ....

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 July 2016

Yes! Trust is so hard to find. Nice work.

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Kavya . 30 July 2015

yes every line you have penned down holds true and is a valuable lesson to all of us. Never underestimate yourself, aim for the moon, even if you miss you wil land amongst the stars ***

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 July 2015

So nicely speculated and penned. True and thrilling composition on hope and beauty. I like most lines are ... NEVER THINK YOU ARE NOTHING FOR YOU ARE TRULY SOMETHING! . TFS. .... 10

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Valsa George 21 July 2015

NEVER THINK YOU ARE NOTHING FOR YOU ARE TRULY SOMETHING! Enjoyed this lovely poem ringing with hope and beauty!

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Smoky Hoss 18 July 2015

What a wonderful philosophy of living, beautiful words.

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Tony Karas 18 July 2015

An awesomely magical write. No doubt Mum is proud of you....

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Valerie Dohren 18 July 2015

A lovely tribute poem for your Mum Lyn, and indeed good counsel for everyone. Up to your usual high standard of writing. Well done.

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Ramesh Rai 18 July 2015

NEVER THINK YOU ARE NOTHING FOR YOU ARE TRULY SOMETHING! Great adice for. all. Enjoyed the read

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