Wednesday, March 18, 2009

The Wonder Of Snow Comments

Rating: 4.5

As I draw open my curtains in the early hours of the morning, the brightness of the sheer white blanket suddenly awakens me.
The sun is also out reflecting on the layer like a parade of bombarded but delicate pearls.
The sheer white layer still untouched… so pure and virginal…
What a scenic surprise!
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Premila Patel
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Ted M 02 August 2009

Reading this stuff is like watching it live on the big screen. Lovely write.

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Fiona Davidson 19 April 2009

Beautiful imagery Premila...takes me back to the winter snows...Fi 10+++

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rohit sapra 13 April 2009

These verses are very nicely written and are very creative. Enjoyed reading this poem.

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