Saturday, July 6, 2013

The Wonder Of A Surviving Enigma Comments

Rating: 5.0

A habitat fades out from the earth with its life
And the perished mortals and their livestock are buried deep.
The lone survivor of a home prays to his god, the all mighty!
For sparing him amidst the fury shown on all.
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Hazel Durham 11 July 2013

Life is a farce, but what an interesting and entertaining world we live in with all its flaws! Brilliant write! !

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Dinesan Madathil 07 July 2013

That`s what makes Madam Valsa a good evaluator of others` writes. The mind that sees things despite our different stands on the philosophy of life makes you a judge of everything up the sleeves of odd poets like me. In fact this poem has been lying unread for two days. I am happy now..

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Valsa George 07 July 2013

Great write, Dinesh! But the irony and satire reflected in these lines are indeed stabbing! For its poetic perfection and effective narration, it well deserves a 10!

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