Tuesday, August 27, 2019

The Woman I Loved... Comments

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Oh the woman I loved was unfaithful
I found out that hard truth today,
now when I look at her I feel hateful
since she found another for her play.
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David Welch
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Practicing Poetess 27 August 2019

David, this is VERY, VERY good- - Reads like a song- - With a surprise twist ending! Loved it! (Serves the 2 cheaters right- - they got what they deserved! ! !) :)

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David Welch 27 August 2019

Yeah, it definitely has a melody to it in my head, but my ability to write out melodies with notes and all that is sorely lacking compared to my rhyme scheme. Thanks for reading.

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Practicing Poetess 29 August 2019

You could make a recording of yourself humming or singing the melody you have in your head. Or find a musically talented friend who'd be willing to set to music what you are hearing. Don't stop now- - Take it the next step! :)

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Uche Nwanze 27 August 2019

Unfaithfulness or infidelity is a hydra dreaded monster that destroys marriages and relationships. Thanks a lot for sharing

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