Oh the woman I loved was unfaithful
I found out that hard truth today,
now when I look at her I feel hateful
since she found another for her play.
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Unfaithfulness or infidelity is a hydra dreaded monster that destroys marriages and relationships. Thanks a lot for sharing
David, this is VERY, VERY good- - Reads like a song- - With a surprise twist ending! Loved it! (Serves the 2 cheaters right- - they got what they deserved! ! !) :)
Yeah, it definitely has a melody to it in my head, but my ability to write out melodies with notes and all that is sorely lacking compared to my rhyme scheme. Thanks for reading.
You could make a recording of yourself humming or singing the melody you have in your head. Or find a musically talented friend who'd be willing to set to music what you are hearing. Don't stop now- - Take it the next step! :)